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I wanted to add this video from the movie "Love Me if You Dare", the movie that inspired this story...plus, I have a massive crush on Guillaume Canet (the French dude from the film) and wanted you to see my new hottie!

Love Me if You Dare


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I wondered how long it would take for Etienne to want more out of his and Adele's relationship. At 17, he's definitely noticing the urges that the young ladies cause him to have, more to the point that Adele causes him to have.

He is popular (but oblivious) with the school girls, and a promising athlete. He's so into Adele that he doesn't care whether he's noticed by other girls.

Adele has reached the point where she's frustrated too, without really knowing why. I think that comes with her age, and changes she's going through. In a way she's oblivious too, but to her own feelings, and it seems as if she wants her friendship with Etienne to stay the same. She pushes him away when she senses that he is wanting to be closer to her; maybe she is afraid. But she agrees to let him come over later, after practice and when her parents are away.

Etienne is eager to spend time with her, but wary of her moods as his thoughts turn toward wanting to initiate intimacy. Adele senses a frustration in him, and when he tries to drop it after a half-sentence request, she won't let it go, eventually getting a shock when her parents arrive, with Etienne's declaration of wanting to be up front and go down through the door rather than the window. Adele goes into survival mode (much like all of us did trying to hide something from our parents), ordering him out, but through the window, and their fight which culminates in a kiss, surprising them both. Adele is scandalized to some extent, and reacts defensively, but Etienne's kissing her has brought her to a crossroads in her feelings for him.

It shows when she decides after a while of not speaking or seeing him that she will initiate conversation and hopefully make up: she dresses nicely and does her hair, and it seems plain that it is all for Etienne. Her excitement is shortlived when she sees the girls fawning over him, and the green-eyed monster is awakened. She handles it by acting indifferent to the scene and to Etienne when he notices her there and pursues her. He has it so bad for her, but she can't or won't be hurt by misinterpreting the adoring "fans" he had surrounding him, choosing instead to wound him with her words (to avoid being wounded any further herself). The sad thing is, Adele may cause exactly what she told him to happen. My guess is that Etienne may well try to salve his hurt with another girl. Whether it has the desired effect on Adele is why we wait for the next chapter!

P.S. Love the video, esp. the song (don't slap me!) LOL

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Oh wow Loretta! That was great!

Ah these two...Etienne is just crazy about Adele, but she is still young and doesnt realize until the end that she wants him all to herself. It was very brave of Etienne to want to talk to Adeles parents, but I can see why Adele kind of freaked out. She was confused by his actions I think, but now that she has experienced jealousy over him, maybe she'll pursue his attentions a little more..although with the way this chapter ended...who knows? I guess you do emoticon

By the way...I LOVE soccer boys and I could totally picture Etienne in his soccer gard looking so hot! emoticon

Also, that video was awesome! It made me want to watch that movie!

Well lovie, you are brilliant! Thanks for the great update!

Katie emoticon
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Hey guys...lack of time and interest in this story is causing me to end it here.

I want to thank Pambi, Cecilie, Amber and Katie for reading as far as you have...and for always being here to read my work.


I love you girls! Image

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AW..well, I'm disappointed but it's cool. I know you have a lot on your plate at the moment, so I hope someday you'll either continue or start a new adventure for these two.

Love you too!

Pambi XOXOX

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Aw, bummer. Well, I understand that you are super busy, but maybe some time soon you'll have something new for us to read. Just know that this story brought a smile to my face and I greatly enjoyed it!

Love you chica!

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